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Should college students hire cleaners

It is reported that some college students hire cleaners to clean their dormitary ,

when it comes , different people may have different opinions . In my opinion , college students should not hire cleaners , the reason are as follows :

First , most students are taken money from their parents , not from them own . so they should not waste money on hiring cleaners , they must realise the hardship of money-making and the commitment from their parents . Second , i think cleaning dormitary is students' duty ,because they needn't do other physical work evryday . on the other hand , as an adult , if you can not do little things , how can you manage a vast task , how can you deal with all probloms occurred in life . So you must get rid of relying on others to do all things . third , college students should be skilled to find interests from cleaning dormitary , you can appeal to your roommates to do housekeeping , and then get together to share feelings of the achievements .

In a word ,college students shouldn't hire cleaners , they'd better do those things by themselves .

Should college students hire cleaners

It is reported that some college students hire cleaners to clean their dormitary , when it comes , different people may have different

opinions . In my opinion , college students should not hire cleaners , the reason are as follows :

First , most students still depend their parents , so they should not spend more money on hiring cleaners ,(说理时尽量不用waste这样明显表示个人倾向的词。可用中性，看不出立场的词) they must realise the hardship of money-making and the commitment from their parents . Second , i think cleaning dormitary is students'

duty ,because they needn't do other physical work evryday . on the other hand , as an adult , if you can not do little things , how can you manage a tough task , how can you deal with all probloms occurred in life . So you must get rid of always relying on others . third ,